01-22-2022, 07:47 PM
I really like what you've done with the texture and the bit of color variety on the basilisk's skin, definitely an interesting effect. I guess it would be a bit too late to change this much but I think that the relationship between Jane and the basilisk is not entirely clear. I think it's a combination of the basilisk having its mouth open and being behind Jane where it could be interpreted that she's unaware of the creature behind her. A physical point of contact with the basilisk would probably help, if she had one hand on its snout or was riding it or something like that, showing that the two are on the same side. Maybe something to consider next time since the image is pretty far along