Crimson CHOW #41 - Cimmerian Cook
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@Darktiste tactical and helpful feedback once again. Much appreciated. Good to see you joining in with the CHOW forum, we are getting some action this time around it seems. Maybe you want to join in with a piece of your own? Could be fun!

In regards to the ear, good shout it was bothering me too, for these CHOW pieces they don’t normally get my usual attention to fundamentals and thing can slip through the cracks as I’m going for speed over accuracy at times. I will fix that. 

Good shout on the grass too. I fully admit this was rushed, I will attempt to fix for the final

As for the anatomy, I was going for a unbalanced pose, is if it were the moment before the barrels toppled over and he fell in a drunken mess. Now granted I broke some anatomy rules for that and it gives him some inaccuracies I didn’t feel it was too far off. I will tweak his belly button to be a tad closer to your centerline in you PO and i helps correct that “twist” at the hip he kind of has.

As for the barbarian in the background, I intentionally hid his feet as to not draw too much attention away by fleshing him out more, with the focus being his impatient expression. But you are right it allows for confusion as to his height. I did notice after adding him that I had not put them both on the right eye plane in regards to the horizon, But with no horizon in sight the only thing to guide you is the barrel lids and bbq. I decided to leave him as is, we can just pretend they are on very uneven ground and he is sat on a box :) as these CHOWs are just for a bit of fun after all 

I may flesh out a couple of the hanging birds just for you.

Once again thanks taking the time for the honest feedback.

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RE: Crimson CHOW #41 - Cimmerian Cook - by Lege1 - 01-06-2023, 11:49 PM
RE: Crimson CHOW #41 - Cimmerian Cook - by Lege1 - 01-07-2023, 12:57 PM
RE: Crimson CHOW #41 - Cimmerian Cook - by Lege1 - 01-07-2023, 11:42 PM
RE: Crimson CHOW #41 - Cimmerian Cook - by Lege1 - 01-08-2023, 05:09 AM
RE: Crimson CHOW #41 - Cimmerian Cook - by CBinnsIllustration - 01-08-2023, 03:26 AM
RE: Crimson CHOW #41 - Cimmerian Cook - by Lege1 - 01-08-2023, 07:27 AM
RE: Crimson CHOW #41 - Cimmerian Cook - by Lege1 - 01-10-2023, 03:13 AM
RE: Crimson CHOW #41 - Cimmerian Cook - by Lege1 - 01-12-2023, 09:10 AM
RE: Crimson CHOW #41 - Cimmerian Cook - by Lege1 - 01-15-2023, 04:12 AM
RE: Crimson CHOW #41 - Cimmerian Cook - by Lege1 - 01-25-2023, 10:33 AM

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