mechapark's sketchbook
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(03-19-2023, 03:35 PM)JosephCow Wrote: Nice feet, dude! Your sketches have a good sense of structure, looks very promising. Welcome to the forum.

Thanks! I try to work on them since I want to continuously improve.

(03-20-2023, 07:48 AM)Dominicque Wrote: Those feet have great form and accurate proportions and those shoes and trouser rendering look divine! Welcome.

Thank you!

(03-21-2023, 01:05 AM)dimensional-knight Wrote: Hmmm, fresh blood. Welcome to Crimson Daggers!

I'll add my voice to the feet chorus. These stylized walking feet are wonderful! It's is a body part artists tend to neglect, it's satisfying to see the care you've put into them.

You've also got a good grasp of anime voice. Classic badass pose and composition, good hair treatment, and the style itself is pleasant.

If I may offer a critique, be careful with the perspective. The people on the ground seem off. There's a technique where you use guide lines to scale them, you'd have to use the lying down variation:

[Image: b2039d66b2911f610b37afc44b6f94ed.jpg]

(images courtesy of Andrew Loomis)

The character is also a bit off. He seems a bit elongated, which is certainly an artistic choice in anime/manga, but his torso and neck are bulky for this archetype. Take this with a grain of salt because I'm not very good at figure drawing yet, but rotating a bit to remove the tricky camera skew and using his shoulders as the point of reference:


(rotating back...)



Getting the perspective and general shape right can make pushing the pose and adding the style easier. If lost at some point you'll always have a sanity check sketch to return to.

Here are couple of places to grab references when in doubt. They offer paid content, but browsing thumbnails is free ;)

https://www.bodiesinmotion.photo
https://www.3dscanstore.com

Thank you for the feedback! I had to wait until I got home to leave a message for everyone (and it's been a while since I've signed up for one of the old school forums and recalled how to use it haha Party).

Yeah, I definitely need to work more on perspective. I think so far the only exercises I've done is pretty much do urban sketching (like draw buildings, draw environments if given enough time), since I feel like it's the most effective way for me to gain an intuitive sense of understanding perspective.

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mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 03-19-2023, 12:27 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by JosephCow - 03-19-2023, 03:35 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by Dominicque - 03-20-2023, 07:48 AM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 03-21-2023, 07:34 AM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 03-22-2023, 09:16 AM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by Leo Ki - 03-23-2023, 09:25 AM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 03-25-2023, 03:12 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 03-25-2023, 03:18 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by Leo Ki - 03-27-2023, 09:05 AM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by JosephCow - 03-27-2023, 12:29 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 03-28-2023, 04:27 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 03-29-2023, 12:17 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by Leo Ki - 03-29-2023, 12:40 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 03-29-2023, 12:49 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by Leo Ki - 03-29-2023, 01:06 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 03-29-2023, 02:05 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 03-31-2023, 02:26 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by Leo Ki - 04-01-2023, 09:52 AM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 04-01-2023, 03:48 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 04-03-2023, 09:17 AM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by darktiste - 04-03-2023, 09:50 AM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by Leo Ki - 04-03-2023, 12:41 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 04-05-2023, 05:44 AM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by darktiste - 04-05-2023, 06:25 AM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 04-07-2023, 12:47 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by darktiste - 04-08-2023, 11:59 AM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 04-08-2023, 02:18 PM
RE: mechapark's sketchbook - by mechapark12 - 04-16-2023, 02:25 PM

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