Need more impact

[Devil Glonk]

I for this piece i wanted the monster to be big lumbering beast rather than something violent, been playing with this for a while but dont really know where i can go with it,
I have since blurred out the crowd in the foreground a bit to give it some depth of field and want to change the colour of the beast too.
Any thoughts?

[Frankie]

I would look at some Shadow of the Colossus screens shots. That game is all about lumbering huge beasts.

Not saying I know much about animals and how violent they are but this creature you have, this "lumbering" beast looks like it could be pretty violent to me. It has the body of a gorilla and what looks to be the head of a monitor lizard. Giant body + lizard head = dino about to mess shit up. Maybe look at animals that are more docile like elephants, gaffes, herbivore dinos.