Critique/Paintover apreciated

[jackjones]

I feel like I have done my best on this image and would like some fedback so I can Improve

[JabyReART]

I will try to play with the warm/cold thing and add some enviro to make it more vibrant. Also the warm/cold lights will play with the armour giving it more sense as a whole...its a start...roughly I show you this in my paintover, hope it helps!
Keep drawing!

[Heavenwill]

Hey Jack, here is a quick paintover, I tried to bring out the form more and built up on the lighting you had. Think about where the light is and the form it hits. The comp is a bit empty too, I added guns very quickly just to give you an idea of where you can go next

[jackjones]

Ok thanks guys I will try and work on this thanks allot for the info

[Mike086]

Jack,

I livestreamed my paint over, you can watch it here: http://www.livestream.com/mciii

I go over the changes I made and why.

[jackjones]

Jack,

I livestreamed my paint over, you can watch it here: http://www.livestream.com/mciii

I go over the changes I made and why.

Thanks for taking the time for that stream I it found very helpful. :)