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I feel like I have done my best on this image and would like some fedback so I can Improve


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#2
I will try to play with the warm/cold thing and add some enviro to make it more vibrant. Also the warm/cold lights will play with the armour giving it more sense as a whole...its a start...roughly I show you this in my paintover, hope it helps!
Keep drawing!


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#3
Hey Jack, here is a quick paintover, I tried to bring out the form more and built up on the lighting you had. Think about where the light is and the form it hits. The comp is a bit empty too, I added guns very quickly just to give you an idea of where you can go next


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#4
Ok thanks guys I will try and work on this thanks allot for the info

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Jack,

I livestreamed my paint over, you can watch it here: http://www.livestream.com/mciii

I go over the changes I made and why.

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(04-24-2013, 11:57 PM)Mike086 Wrote: Jack,

I livestreamed my paint over, you can watch it here: http://www.livestream.com/mciii

I go over the changes I made and why.
Thanks for taking the time for that stream I it found very helpful. :)

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