would'nt mind a quick crit / suggestion on mood composition.

[yton]

work in progress. all ideas welcome :)

[Heavenwill]

Hey I like the comp myself.
The foreground rock looks weird imo, and the cast shadow from the left arm is missing.

I'd love to see where you can go with it.

[yton]

Cheers heavenwill. I've taken you're suggestion on board. I can't believe I missed that left arm shadow. Hehe. Blocked in a few more things now. Might be slightly busy background? Il probably blur most of it out?

[Mike086]

Cool start, did a paint over and vid for you on my live stream.

I assumed it was a Swampthing piece and pushed it further to make it a cover, I also explain more in my video, all in all it's a great start, here is the image for you, some anatomy was fixed, some colors added, I added a fake logo, I explain that in the video.


http://livestream.com/mciii

I say keep it loose and painterly to get you that old school comic cover look.

[yton]

good suggestions mike thank you. :)

[Mike086]

No problem!