12-19-2013, 05:06 PM
As always, comments and critiques are always welcome!
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"Sanguinary Whim"
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12-19-2013, 05:06 PM
As always, comments and critiques are always welcome!
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12-20-2013, 06:30 AM
Heya. So first of all the rendering on the figure is really really great. I mean look at that hand and those feet ohmahgawdlordjeezus. Also great work on getting the materials right.
I only have to crits: 1. I think the head is slightly to small and considering the lighting the area under his chin/jaw would cast a darker shadow. 2. The background: The figure is just standin in red(!) nothingness. You probably concentrated on the figure and then added what would kinda count as a backdrop but it really actually harms your wonderful rendering by being in the same colour as the most signifcant eyecatcher of your figure: the red cloak. You want your figure to stand out and shine. So if you are not interested in putting the figure into a setting I would atleast advise to change the colour of the background.
12-20-2013, 07:22 AM
Thanks! I'll have to have a second look at the head size and greats point about the neck shadowing and the backdrop, for sure! Much appreciated. :)
12-29-2013, 08:31 AM
OK, so now...with revisions. Thanks for the feedback!!!
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