character crit

[Wardy]

ok, so the concept is a air/bird druid type, with some military elements. shes not fully out armour, but the same kind of level as say, an archer- ie shes not directly in combat but standing back a bit doing her nature/air magic shizzle.
she will have lots of tiny bird skulls in bands around her chest, along with a feathered belt and a few other things.
still at very early stages, would love any futher crit at this stage.
oh, and i know the arm on our left is really awkward, and the hip is doing something funky, will fix that unless anyone thinks of a better position for it :D also the clothes are too saturated and so is the skin i think, also the hood is looking weird. seen a lot of new faults since i posted it!
anyway thanks guys!

[The Aether Technician]

seems like you already have a lot of good self crits already- work on that stuff!

I'm not nearly as well versed in anatomy as some of the other artists here, but from what I can see, the shoulder and head should move over a bit-

[Wardy]

wow great point, so simple but that helps make it so much dynamic, great crit.