Marco's sketchbook
Hello, 20yo belgian artist here.

Met Fedodika on February this year and he spoonfed me for ~a whole month along giving a lot of crits etc.
Thought it be nice to check this place since he seems to post 95% of his work here.

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Attached Files
.pdf   Nick Knowles' critiques.pdf (Size: 2 MB / Downloads: 13)

70+Page Koala Sketchbook: SB

Paintover thread, submit for crits!
[color=rgba(255, 255, 255, 0.882)]e owl sat on an oak. The more he saw, the less he spoke.[/color]
I looked into the PDF and it seems that you posted both your versions and the suggested enhancements but without the comments, do I understand correctly? So are you looking to get additional comments on your versions? My first advice is to pay more attention to the size of the body parts relative to each other, and to not mix up the left and right hand.
I would try giving the fauness shorter thighs and longer segments after that, just like goats have, this might improve walking. Reminds me of an old side project of mine for a comic that tells the adventure of some nature creatures.

The sketches with the girl in the corset show considerable improvement, nice job man. Especially like how you exaggerated how the skin bulges around where the clothing meets the skin, or maybe the corset and leggings really just super tight.

That improvement was all since February this year?
@Leo Ki: at the beginning I'd show him some pieces he'd redraw for fun since I was still very new to art, later these redraws included critiques and annotations I cleaned up and left as numbers, so that I have an easier and quicker time re-reading them before drawing.

I still have all the originals though, in case you want to see them:

And yes, criticism is always welcome! 

@bluehabit: unfortunately no, these are from Fedodika. I started in February 2019 and went through nearly 2 months with Fedo tutoring me (see attached file), then nearly didn't draw at all. I only re-started like 10 days ago, so my current progress is just that satyr girl which would be 3-3.5 months progress total really.

My plan for now is making some money from daily pinups within 6-12 months, but I'll be sharing some personal and tasteful projects too.

Catwoman from yesterday with a little fix.

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