07-24-2012, 08:22 PM
Uhm hi there jjeeaann! :)
My biggest problem with the picture right now is the fact that the tree and the island have exact same size and shape. Also, the rocks all seem to be rendered very "contrasty" from almost pure white to very dark - within every form. The rocks on the right side would be more in shadow and not have so strong highlights. Always consider your lightsource. Also, I'd move the boat and maybe turn it into a more storytelling kind of thing - maybe someone's on their way to this place for instance.
![[Image: 1z1qqva.jpg]](http://i45.tinypic.com/1z1qqva.jpg)
I also pushed scale a bit more -> smaller boat, more massive island.
Hope it helped :) Have a nice day and happy painting
/Benjamin
My biggest problem with the picture right now is the fact that the tree and the island have exact same size and shape. Also, the rocks all seem to be rendered very "contrasty" from almost pure white to very dark - within every form. The rocks on the right side would be more in shadow and not have so strong highlights. Always consider your lightsource. Also, I'd move the boat and maybe turn it into a more storytelling kind of thing - maybe someone's on their way to this place for instance.
I also pushed scale a bit more -> smaller boat, more massive island.
Hope it helped :) Have a nice day and happy painting
/Benjamin