06-22-2016, 07:48 PM
Hi Zorrentos,
The 4th panel where the monster breaks the panel borders seem to disrupt the page flow. It looks like the claws suggest to skip the 5th panel and go towards the 6th. Not quite sure about this.
If I may suggest, break the panel from the 4th going to the 5th by drawing in the claw. Or probably add a dialogue that goes through between them!
But maybe it's just me! All in all, looks like it's shaping up real nice!
The 4th panel where the monster breaks the panel borders seem to disrupt the page flow. It looks like the claws suggest to skip the 5th panel and go towards the 6th. Not quite sure about this.
If I may suggest, break the panel from the 4th going to the 5th by drawing in the claw. Or probably add a dialogue that goes through between them!
But maybe it's just me! All in all, looks like it's shaping up real nice!
If you are reading this, I most likely just gave you a crappy crit! What I'm basically trying to say is, don't give up!
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