06-26-2016, 02:01 PM
I really like it! I love the arrogant swagger like pose of the knight and how it's mirrored in the horse. The girly prince is funny too. It's a funny story all round! Probably a bit late to make this comment but everything worked for me just the panel on the far right, one up from the bottom (where Sir Francis is attacking the dragons), the first time I read it I wasn't sure who was being attacked - although it's obvious to me now. Could possibly change the dialogue, something like 'uh oh, that sword looks sharp, no wait, lets talk about this!' or something like that? I dunno just a thought!
I don't think it needs colour - it'd look cool coloured up but would totally change it into a different style, which might detract from the charm of it. Right now it has this 'look at this thing I just drew with a sharpie' vibe about it, which is really fun for a humorus comic.
But give it a go if you have time and see how it turns out!
I don't think it needs colour - it'd look cool coloured up but would totally change it into a different style, which might detract from the charm of it. Right now it has this 'look at this thing I just drew with a sharpie' vibe about it, which is really fun for a humorus comic.
But give it a go if you have time and see how it turns out!