06-26-2016, 07:40 PM
@ JyonnyNovice - Ah, thank you so much! I changed the dialogue (I took one of your suggestions, if you don't mind! :D ) so I hope it's a bit clearer now! I'm so glad it's funny--I wanted it to be cheerful and light-heated, but hopefully not too cheesy, haha.
And I do think you make a good point... I didn't have much time to color today anyway, so i think I'll leave it :) Thank you so much for your thoughts, I really appreciate it!!
And I do think you make a good point... I didn't have much time to color today anyway, so i think I'll leave it :) Thank you so much for your thoughts, I really appreciate it!!