04-11-2017, 04:19 AM
Hi,
Let`s see what I can bring to the table:
1. About the perspective: it is really hartd to tell what perspective system you are usin . There is a one point "feeling" to the scene but some objects (the chair and the shels) are two pointish.. Be more careful when setting up the scene and place your vanishing points more thoroughly. The table seems to float around.
quick overpaint
2. Avoid tangents: the chair and table appear strangely joined together.
The perspective problem is still there but you could use this Model (pm me if you need the SU file).
preview:
Cheers
Let`s see what I can bring to the table:
1. About the perspective: it is really hartd to tell what perspective system you are usin . There is a one point "feeling" to the scene but some objects (the chair and the shels) are two pointish.. Be more careful when setting up the scene and place your vanishing points more thoroughly. The table seems to float around.
quick overpaint
2. Avoid tangents: the chair and table appear strangely joined together.
The perspective problem is still there but you could use this Model (pm me if you need the SU file).
preview:
Cheers