06-23-2017, 07:50 PM
I always love seeing you update your sketchbook haha. I really like the latest piece too, but a couple of thoughts. Her jaw area feels super masculine and her cheek bone sits a tad low on her face. If it's intentional for her to look more masculine, then disregard my words.
The bushes behind her 'magic' also creates a bit of confusion. Because it's so dark and predominant, it takes more than one look to understand the leaves aren't some texture in her magic. Fading it into the background, or allowing it to be blurred more, will clarify the area. The back hand is also looking a little stiff and off. The hand pose is quite hard to actually pull off irl.
Can't wait to see more!
The bushes behind her 'magic' also creates a bit of confusion. Because it's so dark and predominant, it takes more than one look to understand the leaves aren't some texture in her magic. Fading it into the background, or allowing it to be blurred more, will clarify the area. The back hand is also looking a little stiff and off. The hand pose is quite hard to actually pull off irl.
Can't wait to see more!