10-03-2017, 02:35 PM
(10-03-2017, 09:43 AM)ubem Wrote: I like the overall design and movement you have in these. One thing I think could help is pushing the values around the two focal heads and softening the contrast in non-focal areas. Here's a quick paint over (bottom) to demonstrate that idea. Hope this is useful, can't wait to see the final!
cheers for the paint over, spot on about the focal point contrasts, i tend to work pretty dull and push and pull things forward and back in the later stages, the thing im still really unsure about is the wings, ive tried a bunch of variants and havent come up with a satisfying one. also not sure if the overall perspective is dramatic enough..
anyway i put this piece aside for a bit to come back fresh later but it will get finished in time.
its just a personal piece so i dont mind taking the time haha
thanks again for taking a look :)