08-13-2018, 12:47 PM
(08-11-2018, 12:09 PM)ZombieChinchilla Wrote: Thanks, Doolio :)
More concepts (I compiled everything into one pic), but the final piece. Would love some crits
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Hey Zombie the design looks great so far, I like what you did with the lighting and muted colors (if that's the word I'm looking for..) I wish I caught you sooner so I could suggest something with the design itself, don't get me wrong it's great and I enjoy the simplicity but I feel that the mask is a bit out of place. With the wings/cape it looks like the wearer can protect themselves from harsh climates and what not, but what of the mask? What utility does it serve? Why does she wear the mask? (and if i take it off will she die?... sorry) . Is it tradition to wear it? Answering these things in the design makes it feel more deep in my opinion. Also at first i thought she was wearing all winter clothes so I was going to question her foot wear, maybe the clothes blend a little too well? that may just be me.
Either way great job! I enjoy the atmosphere the design creates already as is