02-02-2019, 07:30 PM
I feel like you treat everything with the same amount of detail and that actually not helping your storytelling as it should be focusing on the point of interest.I did a few adjustement to talk about stuff like the rule of third idk if you heard of that principle of design and i also did some blur to bring the focus to the dancer.I also did crop a part of the image so that the dancer fall into 2 point of the center of focus.I know it doesn't seem alot but it just to show how changing a few thing can alter the focus of the story telling and it doesn't cancel that you can have supporting stortelling element that support the main point of interest.Just look at how much space she occupy now compare to before she not in competition for attention now