10-14-2019, 05:33 PM
Hey, Rotohail. Great sketchbook you have so far. Keep it up.
I just want to quickly piggy back on what Fedo said and add that it's not only the saturation that is making the image jarring, but the sheer amount of different colours you are using. The characters are great, but what really gets me is how many colours are in the background/fog. You have bright characters, but also the background has red, green, blue, purple and orange. Let your characters sing more and have them be the focus, not the background.
Hope that helps!
I just want to quickly piggy back on what Fedo said and add that it's not only the saturation that is making the image jarring, but the sheer amount of different colours you are using. The characters are great, but what really gets me is how many colours are in the background/fog. You have bright characters, but also the background has red, green, blue, purple and orange. Let your characters sing more and have them be the focus, not the background.
Hope that helps!