Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook
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I actually think there's a lot of good happening in the last composition. It is a little awkward, yes. But I like the way the hallway is painted, and her dress is also painted really nicely. I think if she were reaching for a door handle, that would add a lot more interest to the piece. What's behind those doors? She's going to find out! But oh, no she got caught, which is why she is looking toward the camera.

Of course you're not going to change it now, but maybe if you go back to it some day. Also, since the moonlight is hitting both the wall and floor more or less equally, I would think they would be the same value? (in response to darktiste)

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Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Pubic Enemy - 03-04-2020, 02:46 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Artloader - 03-04-2020, 03:05 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by darktiste - 03-04-2020, 03:22 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Pubic Enemy - 03-04-2020, 04:16 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by chubby_cat - 03-05-2020, 10:06 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Pubic Enemy - 03-05-2020, 12:15 PM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Pubic Enemy - 03-15-2020, 11:23 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by cgmythology - 03-16-2020, 12:48 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Pubic Enemy - 04-11-2020, 11:57 PM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Artloader - 04-12-2020, 12:54 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Rotohail - 04-14-2020, 06:19 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Pubic Enemy - 04-24-2020, 12:09 PM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by darktiste - 04-24-2020, 01:35 PM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by JosephCow - 04-25-2020, 02:24 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by darktiste - 04-25-2020, 02:51 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by JosephCow - 04-25-2020, 10:09 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Osmium - 04-27-2020, 12:29 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Rotohail - 05-01-2020, 08:31 PM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Pubic Enemy - 05-03-2020, 05:16 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Zorrentos - 05-04-2020, 04:13 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Rotohail - 05-04-2020, 08:11 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by cgmythology - 05-04-2020, 11:21 PM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Pubic Enemy - 05-10-2020, 02:20 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by darktiste - 05-10-2020, 05:17 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Pubic Enemy - 05-10-2020, 05:56 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by JosephCow - 05-10-2020, 06:35 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Artloader - 05-10-2020, 07:01 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by darktiste - 05-10-2020, 07:46 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Gliger - 05-10-2020, 08:44 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by chubby_cat - 05-10-2020, 10:22 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Gliger - 05-10-2020, 10:23 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by darktiste - 05-10-2020, 10:24 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Pubic Enemy - 05-10-2020, 09:54 PM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Rotohail - 05-18-2020, 07:34 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Pubic Enemy - 05-19-2020, 11:35 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by darktiste - 05-19-2020, 01:10 PM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Pubic Enemy - 05-19-2020, 08:28 PM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Rotohail - 05-19-2020, 09:26 PM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Pubic Enemy - 05-20-2020, 07:04 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Rotohail - 05-20-2020, 07:42 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by darktiste - 05-20-2020, 09:09 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Pubic Enemy - 06-03-2020, 11:21 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by graphicnovelist - 06-19-2020, 08:39 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by tiago nunes - 06-04-2020, 04:16 PM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Rotohail - 06-04-2020, 07:05 PM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Leo Ki - 06-22-2020, 11:12 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Artloader - 06-23-2020, 08:20 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Nirenia - 06-26-2020, 12:59 PM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Pubic Enemy - 06-27-2020, 11:43 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by darktiste - 06-27-2020, 12:07 PM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Nirenia - 06-29-2020, 07:32 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by chubby_cat - 06-29-2020, 12:46 PM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by scrap - 07-06-2020, 10:01 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by bonesworth - 07-06-2020, 10:48 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Shuty - 07-16-2020, 03:54 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Rotohail - 09-25-2020, 03:47 PM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Kassatay - 02-21-2021, 05:55 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Farvus - 04-25-2021, 05:55 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Pubic Enemy - 07-07-2021, 09:02 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Jephyr - 11-02-2021, 03:39 PM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Pubic Enemy - 11-13-2021, 01:08 PM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Jephyr - 11-22-2021, 04:40 PM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Artloader - 12-29-2021, 06:54 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by RottenPocket - 01-02-2022, 07:51 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Leo Ki - 02-13-2023, 11:53 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Pubic Enemy - 02-19-2023, 04:57 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by darktiste - 02-19-2023, 05:04 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Azeol - 02-21-2023, 05:24 AM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Jephyr - 02-25-2023, 01:28 PM
RE: Pubic Enemy's Sketchbook - by Leo Ki - 02-28-2023, 01:07 PM

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