05-19-2020, 09:46 PM
I don't know the exact kind of bird either, but any bird with a short stout seed-cracking beak like that is usually called a finch. It's always great to draw fluffy little birds.
New picture looks good to me. I think the only possible problem area is that the roofs of the buildings are angled too steeply. It looks like the horizon line is around where the adventurer's eye level would be, and the buildings are very far away, so the roofs would be closer to (but not quite) being parallel to the horizon line, and the differences between their angles would be very small. I'm not sure though, thinking about perspective still makes me feel like a caveman.
As usual, really nice colors and atmospheric perspective and everything. It reads very well. The reflections on the helmet are really nice too.
New picture looks good to me. I think the only possible problem area is that the roofs of the buildings are angled too steeply. It looks like the horizon line is around where the adventurer's eye level would be, and the buildings are very far away, so the roofs would be closer to (but not quite) being parallel to the horizon line, and the differences between their angles would be very small. I'm not sure though, thinking about perspective still makes me feel like a caveman.
As usual, really nice colors and atmospheric perspective and everything. It reads very well. The reflections on the helmet are really nice too.