06-04-2020, 07:05 PM
Finally!! ha ha ha. Okay the stuff that I liked the most, the colors, light, atmoshpere very vivid, sunshine brightly shining. The purple details on the canine, so funky! Get a retro/back to the 80s vibe.
The stuff that left me puzzle, you did mention the proportions but I first thought you were doing them on purpose, like they feel do consistent and deliberate. You make the head and torsos smaller and enlarge the legs and arms as they go towards hands and feet. So not on purpose then?
Panoramic I'm not sure, like it reads to me like 1/4th of a panoramic view? As a quadrant, like the top-right corner is the center of view of a panorama, but I'm not sure what kind of panorama you had in mind.
Sometimes to me when I feel silly doing something it might just mean I need to get used to it, may be too new a concept, unless I can voice over what is it that feels off to me about it. To me tho the line tool isn't that noticeable! ha ha, like maybe the cyan/cerulean blue house could use some less mechanical touch or texture but maybe it's a plastic house made on a mold! Ha ha, like a toy house? That's a fun idea actually. I dunno, what was your thinking for this piece? Goals?
The interaction between the character and dog is the most interesting point, You could use more palms trees for depth and clouds for depth, like there's a lot of pairing in the design of things, two houses, two doors, the windows seem to form pairs, the dog and character are a pair, but the palm tree and the cloud unless you consider them a pair, they break out a tad, I guess I do notice now some more clouds fading towards the horizon, but maybe adding those things in larger amounts or peeking out at places might give you noise? So they don't stand out.
The stuff that left me puzzle, you did mention the proportions but I first thought you were doing them on purpose, like they feel do consistent and deliberate. You make the head and torsos smaller and enlarge the legs and arms as they go towards hands and feet. So not on purpose then?
Panoramic I'm not sure, like it reads to me like 1/4th of a panoramic view? As a quadrant, like the top-right corner is the center of view of a panorama, but I'm not sure what kind of panorama you had in mind.
Sometimes to me when I feel silly doing something it might just mean I need to get used to it, may be too new a concept, unless I can voice over what is it that feels off to me about it. To me tho the line tool isn't that noticeable! ha ha, like maybe the cyan/cerulean blue house could use some less mechanical touch or texture but maybe it's a plastic house made on a mold! Ha ha, like a toy house? That's a fun idea actually. I dunno, what was your thinking for this piece? Goals?
The interaction between the character and dog is the most interesting point, You could use more palms trees for depth and clouds for depth, like there's a lot of pairing in the design of things, two houses, two doors, the windows seem to form pairs, the dog and character are a pair, but the palm tree and the cloud unless you consider them a pair, they break out a tad, I guess I do notice now some more clouds fading towards the horizon, but maybe adding those things in larger amounts or peeking out at places might give you noise? So they don't stand out.