09-15-2012, 03:49 AM
The way you have the mountains painted isn't working for me. They seem out of place with the rest of the image because they are painted with large strokes while everything else is painted much more tightly. You can still keep the minimal detail and the atmospheric effects, I just think the mountain needs to be more realistic. Compare the style of the mountains to the trees and the sky and you should see what I'm talking about.