06-08-2021, 07:35 PM
Congrats on the show! Sounds very cool!
You have great sense of movement in your pieces, with the poses, the hair and the brushstrokes!
As for a crit, in the last painting the top right part of the hair seems to come from the right, think of it as coming from the skull. You can also draw all of the head, to judge proportions easier, and crop it later.
The drawing above that looks great, but I feel the nail on the thumb slants to the wrong side, or if the thumb is bent that way, then the part of the thumb closer to the hand doesn't seem to fit with the upper part.
Keep 'em coming!!
You have great sense of movement in your pieces, with the poses, the hair and the brushstrokes!
As for a crit, in the last painting the top right part of the hair seems to come from the right, think of it as coming from the skull. You can also draw all of the head, to judge proportions easier, and crop it later.
The drawing above that looks great, but I feel the nail on the thumb slants to the wrong side, or if the thumb is bent that way, then the part of the thumb closer to the hand doesn't seem to fit with the upper part.
Keep 'em coming!!