07-21-2023, 07:43 AM
This one gonna hurt probably to fix.Here the problem she very off balanced according to the perspective view point.If you got any 3d model you can setup up in a 3d program i recommend trying to setup the mannequin in a similar pose and setting the camera to the same high and compare with what you have. The tiger also to me seem problematic because it ''clip'' inside the statue basically occupy the same space as of an other object in space unless the statue is carve on the verticale block but they don't seem to belong to the same block of stone if that the case
there a tangente with the edge block and the base of the statue
Also i don't like how the monument come forward(i know it for the tiger posture) here why the leg of the character completely hide the edge of the ''cube that goes away from the arch which to me just create confusion at this stage when there is no value to separate or indicate a plane change which the edge would visually help us understand.
The weight should be felt on the left leg and the head should be allign vertically somewhat to the leg bearing the weight her torso is leaning to far away from the center mass in my opinion.I am not an expert on that aspect so if anyone read this and have better explanation or POV skill please feel free to add to this comment or provide a pov.
One last thing is that i would like to suggest adding more mountain peaking a bit in those empty corner the top right is very empty it could benefit from something being there i suggest some bird since it seem more like a peaceful serene vibe artwork so i think it would add a bit of movement to a very static scene where the space language is very anchor in square which contribute to the static.
there a tangente with the edge block and the base of the statue
Also i don't like how the monument come forward(i know it for the tiger posture) here why the leg of the character completely hide the edge of the ''cube that goes away from the arch which to me just create confusion at this stage when there is no value to separate or indicate a plane change which the edge would visually help us understand.
The weight should be felt on the left leg and the head should be allign vertically somewhat to the leg bearing the weight her torso is leaning to far away from the center mass in my opinion.I am not an expert on that aspect so if anyone read this and have better explanation or POV skill please feel free to add to this comment or provide a pov.
One last thing is that i would like to suggest adding more mountain peaking a bit in those empty corner the top right is very empty it could benefit from something being there i suggest some bird since it seem more like a peaceful serene vibe artwork so i think it would add a bit of movement to a very static scene where the space language is very anchor in square which contribute to the static.