CGMythology's Sketchbook

[Abrodos]

That looks good! A lot of work has been put in that illustration for sure. I think you have the same problem as me, everything looks too rendered and contrasted (especially on the main character) so it's difficult to guide the eye of the viewer. Also, the facial expression needs more contraction on the muscle that frowns the mouth upwards (I think thats the two zygomaticus ones), so that the cheek is more contracted. Hope that is helpful! That's my first sketchbook ccritique in more than 10 years hehe sorry if I'm rusty!
Btw, many thanks for the reply on my thread! I really appreciate it even though my reply was so short and quick (I post just before going to work).
See you!