01-11-2025, 01:49 PM
Those small flatter bush look like rice krisp block right now or is that rough stone anyways that not so import at this stage as long as the render read correctly.
There nothing major to note but the robe decorative element is very flat you could try to deform it to follow the form a little bit more if you not going to give yourself that effort i would if i was you remove it because it just cheapen the piece.
Remember to break up your stone shape to break up the digitally drawing quality of the piece.
The handle of that sword look rather small i would also lengthen that.
For the cloak some of the fold are not passing the test of proper understanding of weight and material propriety. When a cloak as a shift in it shape there is some reason for example when it touch the ground and it to long it might as it hang from it shoulder stack on itself but where the shape will rarely change is at the mid point of the ''weight'' for that to happen you need a thicker material. Fabric is soft it doesn't have the quality of thicker material that mean that when a change in the shape occur it more rounded than it is to be angular specially the further away from the tension point the fold is. If he was on is knee the tension point would have been much lower and therefor the cloak would have fold on itself more dramatically in that case more extreme folding would have occur but still not to angular.
Here the cloak changing shape is some what ok but it the folding in the inside that make no sense like think of how fold in the robe mirror themselves circularly (the fold are deep rather than small)to a certain degree that happen when the shape of the material can flow down freely.
Anyways all that to say that creating believable fold is hard and you should keep studying and maybe if bring attention to it you might catch what i mean. The issue is some of the direction of those fold and how they merge into each other which become very chaotic and unpredictable when the material hit the ground. Also how you fold are some of them do no reflect the tension of weight they are to wavy. A fold that as weight at the top is going down ''straight'' along the form but as it reach the ground it can loose some of that tension.
There nothing major to note but the robe decorative element is very flat you could try to deform it to follow the form a little bit more if you not going to give yourself that effort i would if i was you remove it because it just cheapen the piece.
Remember to break up your stone shape to break up the digitally drawing quality of the piece.
The handle of that sword look rather small i would also lengthen that.
For the cloak some of the fold are not passing the test of proper understanding of weight and material propriety. When a cloak as a shift in it shape there is some reason for example when it touch the ground and it to long it might as it hang from it shoulder stack on itself but where the shape will rarely change is at the mid point of the ''weight'' for that to happen you need a thicker material. Fabric is soft it doesn't have the quality of thicker material that mean that when a change in the shape occur it more rounded than it is to be angular specially the further away from the tension point the fold is. If he was on is knee the tension point would have been much lower and therefor the cloak would have fold on itself more dramatically in that case more extreme folding would have occur but still not to angular.
Here the cloak changing shape is some what ok but it the folding in the inside that make no sense like think of how fold in the robe mirror themselves circularly (the fold are deep rather than small)to a certain degree that happen when the shape of the material can flow down freely.
Anyways all that to say that creating believable fold is hard and you should keep studying and maybe if bring attention to it you might catch what i mean. The issue is some of the direction of those fold and how they merge into each other which become very chaotic and unpredictable when the material hit the ground. Also how you fold are some of them do no reflect the tension of weight they are to wavy. A fold that as weight at the top is going down ''straight'' along the form but as it reach the ground it can loose some of that tension.