Jaye's sketchbook

[Jaye23]

The arm holding the rifle with the cape and the white pant of the alien behind this area is value problematic to create proper read also the use of 3 big line to describe the bottom part of the arm kinda clash with the of rest the piece this stylization is not  found anywhere else so it kinda flatten thing in that part compare to the more complex form you shown elsewhere i am not getting the same ''weight'' or quality to the material. My idea to get away with that would be to transform that arm into a cybernetic one(remove the sleeve) or at least just show the hand being somewhat robotic  this whay those sharp angle look somewhat more robotic anyways that my 2 cent.

Very cool to have black and white with 3 overlapping object that take some skill to pull out.

Did you took off opacity with an eraser or did you play with pressure sensitivity to get the semi black almost atmospheric perspective feel?

A bit of soft brush erasing.

You are absolutely right, that whole area felt extremely messy.
And that arm, oh boy, it looks all sorts of funky. For whatever reason I didn't notice it until I was done, lol.


Probably a better pose, not as awkward at least.

Thank you so much for the feedback! Will definitely keep this in mind for future work!