Yesterday, 04:49 PM
This one could use stronger silhouette i feel like that the problem sometime when there overlap shape it start to get confusing as to what we are look at specially at such a early state when i am trying to give feed back i want to understand the intention sometime it better to just post even earlier a quick lineart pass this way you can really determine if you have a strong silhouette value is for me something that more commitment and somewhat of a trap when trying to move away from piece that are not necessary working yet. Also it truely seem like there is a hate for thumbnailling now a day and this it a shame because it so much of the problem solving before problem persist...
This one as look like a dragon but there is no leg so i feel it even more important to get that wyvern look maybe have a longer neck. The wing are so big and the value and edge control is to soft that they turn into something like a cloud on the left side.
One other thing is description when presenting what you have done. I feel like saying it a practice/wip is just not enough there doesn't give us any of the intention behind what your are looking to achieve if you are looking to grow as an artist you have to start to be more intentional and vocal about your direction.
Take care .Hope to see more soon.
This one as look like a dragon but there is no leg so i feel it even more important to get that wyvern look maybe have a longer neck. The wing are so big and the value and edge control is to soft that they turn into something like a cloud on the left side.
One other thing is description when presenting what you have done. I feel like saying it a practice/wip is just not enough there doesn't give us any of the intention behind what your are looking to achieve if you are looking to grow as an artist you have to start to be more intentional and vocal about your direction.
Take care .Hope to see more soon.