I would like trace overs please

[Blepleb]

There a saying that goes something like you can't bend the rule if you don't know the rule. It be somewhat like calling a color an other name than it color.How can you distort something if you don't understand it basic shape ... it just distorted to start it would be like calling a sphere a cube.

If you really want to play with angle and you know nothing about anatomy i suggest not to  force yourself into coloring right away your just putting unnecessary weight before you have even laid the blueprint of what the drawing going to look like. A logical approach is somewhat more about establishing the big shape first with basic geometric form so you can establish proportion shape and direction first before you build value or color that atleast how i like to approach my thinking i know some people block out value more than they use line art you just have to find what work for you.

As far as a methodology i don't see you having any kind of study plan so your not build somewhat of a logical progression of your fundamental which make it hard for you to order a logical approch to drawing which leave you at the mercy of guess work ... i am not against unorthodox approach but if you are able to follow instruction maybe you should seek out more tutorial on anatomy before you ask for feedback so you can atleast absorb what will be share atleast in term of artistic vocabulary.

i kinda prefer to approach art from an ''illogical'' approach, because that's more fun for me, i've realized that if i think too hard then art loses it's fun for me and i'm not aiming to be a professional. right now i'm trying to learn just by doing because that's what i struggle with the most as a perfectionist is getting too scared to even try, ive been trying to add more details to my anatomy when i doodle recently and i can see myself getting better even if it's still far from perfect and will probably take longer than studying in a more traditional way. 
i know its unconventional, but i'm jumping between line art and color because coloring & shading the parts that i do know how to handle a bit better makes the drawing feel a little closer to being done and gives me more of a guess towards how other parts of the art should look even if i don't get it right on my first try.

i'm asking for a trace over and maybe an explanation that i could apply to my later drawings/take note of because i feel like it could still be helpful for me even though i'm taking a very scattered approach to art which i'll admit to.
P.S. i really hope this doesn't come across as me being defensive i'm just trying to explain why i'm doing art like this /gen