FINALLY UNLEASHED!
#3
(11 hours ago)darktiste Wrote: I am a dissector of the first sector. Not a master of animation or anything of that kind probably not the best to give advise on anatomy or cloth but a perhaps a sharper eye is often enough just enough to give you clue for you to be on you path to an answers.

I see a good deal of repetition in the style you have establish and that might be due to not getting much feedback so maybe that something you could play more with try to get more variety in the proportion of the character outside of the tall and slender. Maybe play around with bone protrusion so you can get a bit more visual identity between the different character also why not put on some cloth... oh yeah probably because you avoid that topic... Other than that i can't really give you point for color right now.

As I build a more formidable repertoire of posts here more critique-able patterns will be brought to light! Repetition does indeed tend to be the name of my game though hahaha
Reply


Messages In This Thread
FINALLY UNLEASHED! - by Feeglesnorp - Yesterday, 05:44 PM
RE: FINALLY UNLEASHED! - by darktiste - 11 hours ago
RE: FINALLY UNLEASHED! - by Feeglesnorp - 10 hours ago

Forum Jump:


Users browsing this thread: 2 Guest(s)