Help Pleeeeeeease.
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He's the main character of my book, and yeah the tear is a narrative decision.
In the intro of the book he see's is wife being killed, then has to do the killers dirty work for him.

I like the wider chest, think that really helps. I'll keep at it!!
Cheers for the help people. :)

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Help Pleeeeeeease. - by Devil Glonk - 10-13-2012, 07:43 PM
RE: Help Pleeeeeeease. - by Piotr Jasielski - 10-13-2012, 09:41 PM
RE: Help Pleeeeeeease. - by Flo - 10-13-2012, 09:45 PM
RE: Help Pleeeeeeease. - by Devil Glonk - 10-13-2012, 10:05 PM
RE: Help Pleeeeeeease. - by Laura_H - 10-15-2012, 09:15 PM

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