02-01-2012, 10:25 AM
Looks better! I really like this image.
The body does need to be a tiny bit bigger to match her head like Zesiul said.
I have a few suggestions that might make it look and read better. The animal on her neck could be a little smaller and repositioned in a straighter pose, at the moment it looks like it's petrified/about to be blown off her shoulder. I'd recommend scaling it down so that none of it's features go higher than the top of her head, and maybe moving his tail to the right, behind his ears because at the moment the way its pointed makes your eye drift off to the corner of the image. If that makes sense... I can show you what I mean if you'd like!
Also with the orange glow behind her I'd add some more of that onto the left side of her face. And using the yellow from your glow at the bottom I would faintly outline the highlights on her left side because it makes the glow more intense. Don't forget some darker shadows because of the back light!
Also to balance out your orange side I would add a lighter blue smoke on the right side to give some contrast to the image. Then you can add this to the right side of her face and it'll make her look more 3D and the lighting more interesting.
I hope that all made sense! Like I said, I can show you what I mean if not.
Keep up the good work!
The body does need to be a tiny bit bigger to match her head like Zesiul said.
I have a few suggestions that might make it look and read better. The animal on her neck could be a little smaller and repositioned in a straighter pose, at the moment it looks like it's petrified/about to be blown off her shoulder. I'd recommend scaling it down so that none of it's features go higher than the top of her head, and maybe moving his tail to the right, behind his ears because at the moment the way its pointed makes your eye drift off to the corner of the image. If that makes sense... I can show you what I mean if you'd like!
Also with the orange glow behind her I'd add some more of that onto the left side of her face. And using the yellow from your glow at the bottom I would faintly outline the highlights on her left side because it makes the glow more intense. Don't forget some darker shadows because of the back light!
Also to balance out your orange side I would add a lighter blue smoke on the right side to give some contrast to the image. Then you can add this to the right side of her face and it'll make her look more 3D and the lighting more interesting.
I hope that all made sense! Like I said, I can show you what I mean if not.
Keep up the good work!