02-02-2012, 05:57 AM
Hey renet. I like the dangling high above the ground story you have going, high drama! Can I offer you a few tips? Firstly lose the date, its really garish and distracting. Secondly the circular oval element is destroying the depth, is that the castle? could also be a surfboard? Thirdly The fields below read but they should be less saturated as "atmospheric perspective" would come into play... Lastly you shoud probably concentrate on just black white and grey values for now on a small canvas for now. I make the mistake of rushing into colour too often and often get bogged down in a swamp of poor decisions. Photoshop colour adjustment layers mean that you can easily colour your work later on. I hope this helps, I look forward to seeing your progress :-)