11-18-2012, 09:21 AM
Matt - its ok, i can understand..try to draw the figure as big as you can..that bird is a bit too much..you can add supporting elements in the final Pinup but not THAT big for sure, try to add more interest in your artwork, maybe try to think about the concepts again.
just wanted to say to everyone, try to spend at least an hour every day on your assignments and avoid working at the last minute.
please do not post at the last minute i.e. when class starts or few minutes before the class, please give me at least 3-4 hours to go through your works and think about possible enhancement/feedback etc.
for the next class -
use reference to enhance your artwork, dont do the exact copy..you can use your own body and/or face as a ref. if you cant find the exact ref. for your artwork.
try to work on the overall proportion, balance, rhythm, anatomy, contrast, background elements (if any)
try to make the whole artwork clear/readable as in the overall pose, facial expressions.
your artwork shouldn't look like a rushed job as you have a whole week.
i hope i've made myself clear, please feel free to ask if you have any doubts.
![[Image: paintover171112.jpg]](http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/1862/paintover171112.jpg)
examples for the overall artwork/figure/expression for the next class
![[Image: ChrisPaintoversml.jpg]](https://3.bp.blogspot.com/-sbEtYq39jvw/UKPG8dDoo6I/AAAAAAAAChM/8iKAuZF1v0U/s1600/ChrisPaintoversml.jpg)
![[Image: girlAxe-copy.jpg]](https://3.bp.blogspot.com/-f9kZcWEQNBU/UC-32iwWecI/AAAAAAAAB2M/9CxRlgkVz8U/s1600/girlAxe-copy.jpg)
![[Image: new-2-copia.jpg]](https://3.bp.blogspot.com/-odnFpHoo3dA/T2NNWfw7QII/AAAAAAAABTc/XB1lZuJuLsE/s1600/new-2-copia.jpg)
good luck !
just wanted to say to everyone, try to spend at least an hour every day on your assignments and avoid working at the last minute.
please do not post at the last minute i.e. when class starts or few minutes before the class, please give me at least 3-4 hours to go through your works and think about possible enhancement/feedback etc.
for the next class -
use reference to enhance your artwork, dont do the exact copy..you can use your own body and/or face as a ref. if you cant find the exact ref. for your artwork.
try to work on the overall proportion, balance, rhythm, anatomy, contrast, background elements (if any)
try to make the whole artwork clear/readable as in the overall pose, facial expressions.
your artwork shouldn't look like a rushed job as you have a whole week.
i hope i've made myself clear, please feel free to ask if you have any doubts.
![[Image: paintover171112.jpg]](http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/1862/paintover171112.jpg)
examples for the overall artwork/figure/expression for the next class
![[Image: ChrisPaintoversml.jpg]](https://3.bp.blogspot.com/-sbEtYq39jvw/UKPG8dDoo6I/AAAAAAAAChM/8iKAuZF1v0U/s1600/ChrisPaintoversml.jpg)
![[Image: girlAxe-copy.jpg]](https://3.bp.blogspot.com/-f9kZcWEQNBU/UC-32iwWecI/AAAAAAAAB2M/9CxRlgkVz8U/s1600/girlAxe-copy.jpg)
![[Image: new-2-copia.jpg]](https://3.bp.blogspot.com/-odnFpHoo3dA/T2NNWfw7QII/AAAAAAAABTc/XB1lZuJuLsE/s1600/new-2-copia.jpg)
good luck !