02-03-2012, 09:54 AM
Hey welcome!
I must say I really prefer your first sketch! The simple and bold value structure is working very well, however I'd rethink the design of the girl, Howl looks excellent though.
I don't feel your latest sketch has the same X-factor in terms of composition and lighting, also I feel the details are a bit scattered, as your first piece has a clear focus - I checked out your other work, great stuff, looking forward to seeing you grow!
I must say I really prefer your first sketch! The simple and bold value structure is working very well, however I'd rethink the design of the girl, Howl looks excellent though.
I don't feel your latest sketch has the same X-factor in terms of composition and lighting, also I feel the details are a bit scattered, as your first piece has a clear focus - I checked out your other work, great stuff, looking forward to seeing you grow!