02-04-2012, 09:14 AM
I like how you are designing Sophie. I can see a Wizard of Oz influence. I always saw a connection between those two.
As far as crits go I'd like to see more happening in your comps. These all look pretty basic. I can see you did the feather study so you can include Howl, but I'm not seeing him in any of the comps. You may also want to include the castle, because it's too cool to ignore.
If this is a part of that scene where Sophie finds howl turning into a raven, then color is going to be a huge deal. It's a very oppressive scene meaning the environment has to dominate the comp. Here is a video that breaks down one oppressive composition.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fNoPx_W58...95_CPRhA6Z
As far as crits go I'd like to see more happening in your comps. These all look pretty basic. I can see you did the feather study so you can include Howl, but I'm not seeing him in any of the comps. You may also want to include the castle, because it's too cool to ignore.
If this is a part of that scene where Sophie finds howl turning into a raven, then color is going to be a huge deal. It's a very oppressive scene meaning the environment has to dominate the comp. Here is a video that breaks down one oppressive composition.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fNoPx_W58...95_CPRhA6Z