02-05-2012, 11:13 PM
I love Your color palette. You need to adjust contrast a little - push the darker parts and highlights, this way it'll read more like a 3d piece.
I'm not comfortable with the placement of the character. I'd personally move her towards the center. Her upper body is also a little to small in comparison to the lower part (her belt could be a little lower). Skin tone on the neck is good - make it the tone of legs as well. Left part of the gun is in different perspective than the rest.
Keep it up and good luck in the contest!
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Hey, I did a quick paintover to show what I'd do with values.
![[Image: Nausicaa.jpg]](http://s15.postimage.org/8rh7zu0k9/Nausicaa.jpg)
I'm not comfortable with the placement of the character. I'd personally move her towards the center. Her upper body is also a little to small in comparison to the lower part (her belt could be a little lower). Skin tone on the neck is good - make it the tone of legs as well. Left part of the gun is in different perspective than the rest.
Keep it up and good luck in the contest!
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Hey, I did a quick paintover to show what I'd do with values.