01-30-2013, 12:24 AM
Well I'm gonna comment the character design itself, I won't talk about the technique and style, cuz that's a matter of personal taste!
So let's begin, I feel that your concept is very nice, but I feel the the face seems to be disconnected to the body, the face lines should also come somehow in the rest of the body! About the legs, I'm a bit concerced how legs look like, they look like a pan's leg, but it's working as a dog leg, the bone coming out is also a lil awkward I'd study different placement. I also don't get why there are some horns in his back, I means he has boneSpikes where there shouldn't be and where there could be there are lil needle looking horns, it's something to be thought.
Your concept is great, it's just lacking some refinement! Go ahead, take more time to think about the things going on and how they help your character to comunicate, don't put add stuff just cause they look nice!!
I hope my comment was useful!
So let's begin, I feel that your concept is very nice, but I feel the the face seems to be disconnected to the body, the face lines should also come somehow in the rest of the body! About the legs, I'm a bit concerced how legs look like, they look like a pan's leg, but it's working as a dog leg, the bone coming out is also a lil awkward I'd study different placement. I also don't get why there are some horns in his back, I means he has boneSpikes where there shouldn't be and where there could be there are lil needle looking horns, it's something to be thought.
Your concept is great, it's just lacking some refinement! Go ahead, take more time to think about the things going on and how they help your character to comunicate, don't put add stuff just cause they look nice!!
I hope my comment was useful!