05-31-2013, 02:59 AM
I like these. You've really captured a lot of character in these pieces but I think you need to work on your soft and hard edges. At the moment all your edges are soft which gives a blurry look to everything. Having some hard edges around areas of high contrast and interest will make things much more interesting. There used to be some really good tutorials about edges on CA.org but of unfortunately it's still down.