I really need help

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hey there! the concept is very cool, but i think you're rendering too soon. try experimenting more, looking for different angles and ways to enhance what your trying to say.

here's some minor suggestions, but you should consider rebuilding your composition. you are trying to show the entire dragon, that is not needed, you can hide parts of the dragon or crop them out to enhance scale

i tried to respect your original composition, but i think another angle would be more effective. think http://i1153.photobucket.com/albums/p502...agosa2.jpg or http://i1153.photobucket.com/albums/p502...ragosa.jpg




hope this helps!