08-24-2013, 07:19 AM
You have very interesting designs there.
For your last compo , I may increase the size of the girl because right now you have an empty space in the bottom left area. The reading is cut in this part. You may use your helmet and change slightly the gesture of the girl to create more curves and more interests in the overall composition.
I wouldn't put the main light against the wall but below the door or behind just to make a call for the audience -" Hey what s going on behind"? and let us imagine what's behind. Instead of closing the door and "closing" this mental conversation.
You could play also between the design balance of your helmet/clothes and what is happening with this architecture. Using interesting vocabulary related shapes to connect the character and his environment.
I can comment more about your picture :p but the main things are here for me. I'm not a pro though, hope it helps you. :) godo job!
For your last compo , I may increase the size of the girl because right now you have an empty space in the bottom left area. The reading is cut in this part. You may use your helmet and change slightly the gesture of the girl to create more curves and more interests in the overall composition.
I wouldn't put the main light against the wall but below the door or behind just to make a call for the audience -" Hey what s going on behind"? and let us imagine what's behind. Instead of closing the door and "closing" this mental conversation.
You could play also between the design balance of your helmet/clothes and what is happening with this architecture. Using interesting vocabulary related shapes to connect the character and his environment.
I can comment more about your picture :p but the main things are here for me. I'm not a pro though, hope it helps you. :) godo job!