vampire trap

[gangstershit]

Here's a comp sketch for a piece I'm working on. It's still pretty rough but I'd like to know if there is anything I can nip in the bud, before I commit to a long grueling render. I'll work on studies while I wait for crits.

Narrative: A vampire hunter baits vampires into a set up, by crashing her vespa. Vampires can't resist a damsel in distress.