11-15-2013, 09:34 AM
Orange
I feel these selected areas need some readjustments on the form. Make the chin and jaw a bit slimmer, especially his chin. The crease on his left cheek looks unnatural, it needs to curve more to the side and not just slope to one side and then drops straight down. Look at how his cheek muscle stretch and forms those lines.
Blue
Too dark. Soften that part and thin that shadow more.
Green
These areas need to look more fuller. Puff those parts up. The need muscle.
Some areas just has that subtle detail, so try not to make it look he's flexing his face.
Yellow
Needs more detail to cover that dark, blocky patch.