do my colors look good? updated.

[kingamongpawns]

Her left hand just kinda merges with her forearm. You should shave off a little on the inside of her wrist and also slim down her thumb a bit. I would draw her face as well. The thing covering her face looks odd. If you're just trying to avoid drawing her face then maybe cover it with some kind of mask. It would be more interesting than a cloth. Faces are what people look at first in any piece so you want the first focal point to be designed well.

And her hair looks like it needs to be brushed. I think you're using too many lines to describe the texture of her hair. Try to break the hair down into 3 or 4 larger shapes. I would definitely use a photo reference of a woman with the hair you're going for.

thanks for the advice. i was not finished with the arm and hand yet, but you are right. i was not avoiding drawing the face i do want it covered with something but will remove the cloth if its not workin. your totally right with the hair to it literally is a bunch of lines lol.