Texture trouble

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Wow, thanks for gathering all this for me!

Unfortunately I'm throwing this all out, it's not working and I think I can do better.

I started on a bunch of new thumbnails after reading up a bit on composition. The ones marked read look the best to me.

As I was designing I noticed that my intent changed as well, I discovered an emotional component to designing value structures. I started to look arrangements that had impact. I discovered a few comps with an oppressive feel on my heroine which I really like. The piece is going from kinda happy go lucky to sort of dire.

we'll see. My next question is what do I do after this step?

edit: almost forgot here's the info I dug up, might be useful

http://muddycolors.blogspot.com/2012/08/...cture.html

http://muddycolors.blogspot.com/2012/08/...cture.html

http://muddycolors.blogspot.com/2012/10/...nails.html

http://gurneyjourney.blogspot.com/2012/0...ation.html