01-15-2014, 08:44 PM
What Vigil said, but also think about the structure of the water. At the moment it looks like hair, long and fibrous strands. Water rarely does this. I'm going to guess that you didn't gather ref of water doing various things and try and apply what might actually work in this situation. So get looking at ref.
Also, water reflects and refracts as well as casts shadows and I don't think you really addressed any of these in the water form itself and of the body on the water.
The image is very monotone, so if you deviate from the colours too much, it will look odd. You are aiming at integration, so stick with what is there.
Also, water reflects and refracts as well as casts shadows and I don't think you really addressed any of these in the water form itself and of the body on the water.
The image is very monotone, so if you deviate from the colours too much, it will look odd. You are aiming at integration, so stick with what is there.