A pirate in love
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(02-11-2014, 11:23 PM)Psychotime Wrote: Your composition is too flat, I think.

And I'm not so sure if we need to be pulled back so much.

I think you should do some thumbnails that are closer to the characters and at a more dynamic view than what you have here.

Thank you Psychotime, I didn't realize how flat my image was until I read your comment. I definitely agree. I'm bad at dynamic compositions, as I lack practice in them, are there any suggestions as far as reference or resources go? I'll sketch up some more thumbnails today.
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A pirate in love - by Xiaogabe - 02-11-2014, 12:40 PM
RE: A pirate in love - by Psychotime - 02-11-2014, 11:23 PM
RE: A pirate in love - by Xiaogabe - 02-12-2014, 02:17 AM
RE: A pirate in love - by Cj_marsh - 02-17-2014, 06:07 AM
RE: A pirate in love - by Mike086 - 02-17-2014, 07:56 AM
RE: A pirate in love - by Xiaogabe - 02-18-2014, 04:39 AM
RE: A pirate in love - by Xiaogabe - 03-09-2014, 06:03 AM
RE: A pirate in love - by Xiaogabe - 02-17-2014, 06:29 PM

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