02-13-2014, 04:53 AM
Kaffer: Thanks for the feedback, I can see what you mean about "gatekeeper". I'm looking for a new pose tomorrow. Love how yours is coming along. Careful with the values and contrast though, right now the guy in the front is pulling the focus away from the elder because he is brighter. Also, you could try pushing the colors a bit more towards a warm/cold contrast with some more blues in the background, I imagine that could look really cool :)
crackedskull: Love the face, getting better with every update <3
Jaik: Great mood <3 I feel bad for pointing this out this late, but that branch that overlaps with the elder's willows (on the lit side) looks off to me... it's so stiff and straight and the angle looks forced. I think it should point more towards the man/the viewer, judging from where it is connected to the tree. Except if it were broken at the base. If you want the overlap with the elder, maybe let it come out of the side of the tree?
More progress on the char sheet and background, next I will have to invent a better pose for the elder and paint him in.
crackedskull: Love the face, getting better with every update <3
Jaik: Great mood <3 I feel bad for pointing this out this late, but that branch that overlaps with the elder's willows (on the lit side) looks off to me... it's so stiff and straight and the angle looks forced. I think it should point more towards the man/the viewer, judging from where it is connected to the tree. Except if it were broken at the base. If you want the overlap with the elder, maybe let it come out of the side of the tree?
More progress on the char sheet and background, next I will have to invent a better pose for the elder and paint him in.