03-05-2014, 08:58 PM
Hey there, you should be more specific when asking for help, what do you think that needs help? the proportions? the rendering? the colors? etc.
So i did a super quick paint over, i changed a few things like proportions and abolished that boobplate haha i hope you dont mind.
But from what i can see, the biggest problem is the proportions, you rendered some parts like the shoulder pads nicely, but the arms and the hands are really small compared to the rest of the upper body and the upper body is way to small compared to the legs.
Also, check out the direction of the legs and feet.
And for the face, i dont know what kind of character do you wanted to represent, but the aware that the more lines and muscles you make visible on a face, the more old/masculine it will look.
So i did a super quick paint over, i changed a few things like proportions and abolished that boobplate haha i hope you dont mind.
But from what i can see, the biggest problem is the proportions, you rendered some parts like the shoulder pads nicely, but the arms and the hands are really small compared to the rest of the upper body and the upper body is way to small compared to the legs.
Also, check out the direction of the legs and feet.
And for the face, i dont know what kind of character do you wanted to represent, but the aware that the more lines and muscles you make visible on a face, the more old/masculine it will look.
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